想给大学生写一篇好的英语作文，离不开精彩的短文和评论。

学习专升本英语作文，精彩范文和点评是少不了的。今天小编为大家整理了一篇专升本英语的范文及解析以供参考。

(粗体部分是老师的批改和批注)

On Excessive Packaging In the fast-moving society，there's an increasingly serious social phenomenon of excessive package. Various products with exquisite packaging are displayed in malls，catering to some individuals who are keen on that goods. Such as clothes，cosmetics and so on. Three factors weigh heavily for this problem. First of all，a number of consumers believe that the more elegant the package is，the higher the quality will be. And some persons would like to purchase these goods as gifts to satisfy their all kinds of consumption psychology. In the next place，in order to obtain greater economic benefits（profits），some enterprises upgrade products packaging constantly. A third contributing factor is the inadequate laws and regulations. Providing enterprises lack of the corresponding integrity legal system（句子的结构，providing 后面最好充当结果状语，改为making enterprises lacking the ~），it （which）will lead to market disorder. From where I stand， the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of excessive packaging. Above all，our government ought to perfect policies and regulations，and increase penalties for excessive packaging，making illegal enterprises pay higher costs. In addition，various news media should strengthen publicity and guidance，which advocates healthy and environmentally friendly consumption concept，guiding businesses to enhance their sense of social responsibility and awareness of integrity. Last but not least，our consumers are supposed to set up correct，rational and scientific consumption consciousness. I，as a college student，am convinced that it is of great significance for youngest to insist on reasonable consumption consciousness. If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society，it will be better and better.

整篇文章用词写得很好。第二段第二点可以适当扩大，可以继续努力。

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